Friday, November 6, 2009

Flash 55

Sensory Overload!
Louise absolutely loves it.
DingDingDing Blinding Blinking Flashing Neon
Bells Whistles 7's Aces Diamonds Wheel of Fortune People
She sticks the first quarter in.
She's ahead! She's behind!
The slots tease her into a false hope of financial freedom.
Heading home, she wonders what she'll tell her husband.
Louise absolutely hates it.

11 comments:

  1. My heart starting beating really fast at all the noise and excitement in your 55 ~ loved it Bubbie. Glad you played this week.

    Hugs my friend,

    My 55 is posted: Flash 55 ~ Awakening

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  2. Great 55.
    I saw a lady lose $ 500 in the dollar machines.
    I wonder what she told her husband?
    I have finished my 55.
    You’ll find it

    HERE.

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  3. That's why I don't gamble. I'm having heart failure just reading your 55. Good one.

    Clink on this link to go right to my current website:

    Flash 55 - Holiday Preparations

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  4. what happens in vegas syas in vegas...along with all the money. great 55. they can be so tempting...

    mine is up!

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  5. ouch, i had those machines, glad i don't play them. great 55 i like playing this one it is safe. mine is up too

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  6. A scene well captured and in only 55 words. Don't you just love it! My 55 is HERE.

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  7. Reminds me of addictive behavior...love it, hate it, love it! You summed it up very well in only 55ve! Have a good weekend!

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  8. It's all about the Action Bubbie...
    Excellent 55 My Dear!!
    You are really getting good at this. I'm very proud of you.
    Thank you for this fine contribution, and have a Kick-Ass Week-End...G

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  9. Humans so love to throw their money away.
    Well written.

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  10. Oh wow! You captured a lot of action and emotion in 55 words. Impressive!

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  11. That is so true. It happens most often than not!

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